Wednesday, October 22, 2025

Mount Aniakchak, AK: Dear Stanford Law Rock Center and Priya (Huskins), All, Greetings! Thanks so much for your stellar "Mandatory Arbitration: Delaware vs. the SEC" webinar today * * * Stanford Medicine Continuing Medical Education & Yoga asana complementary therapeutics' questions - Pediatric Orthopedics & Sports Medicine Webinar - Saturday, October 18, 2025 * * * Proposed Reedie+ book group beginning in late December 2024 or early 2025? - in November 2025 in Canyon? & Happy birthday, Byron & Cindy (on 10/20 and 10/21 I think) * * * Poetry and machine learning editing? Asked a number of times - Which artificial intelligence large language models are best for editing poetry?



Stanford Law Rock Center - Mandatory Arbitration: Delaware vs. the SEC — What Boards Need to Know 


Scott MacLeod sgkmacleod@worlduniversityandschool.org

1:48 PM (4 hours ago)
to Priyagreg.varallojeffgrundfestScottWUaS_CEORock


Dear Stanford Law Rock Center and Priya (Huskins), All, 

Greetings!

Thanks so much for your stellar Stanford Law Rock Center Mandatory Arbitration: Delaware vs. the SEC webinar today. I asked the question in the Q&A about "How could AI and ML and legal large language models help here, regarding questions of choosing an arbitrator in the future?"  In growing MIT OCW-centric wiki World University and School / WUaS Corporation, both planned in 200 countries and for speakers of all 7159 known living languages, and potentially in WUaS coding for all 7.9 billion people on the planet from here - https://wiki.worlduniversityandschool.org/wiki/You_at_World_University - and to create wiki people-to-people free universal education, and to distribute a single main cryptocurrency like Stanford Mine Pi cryptocurrency free money daily - https://minepi.com/sgkmac - and to end poverty worldwide even, I wondered further how all of you on today's panel might think through how both wings of WUaS would interoperate together legally, financially, and re WUaS Boards of Directors, and in terms of coding both of WUaS AI platforms & regarding these TwitterX posts - 

"Stanford Law Rock Center Mandatory Arbitration: Delaware vs. the SEC starting 9am PT - https://law.stanford.edu/event/mandatory-arbitration-delaware-vs-the-sec/ Curious how it might inform coding AI platforms for both WUaS wings: nonprofit 501 c 3 @WorldUnivAndSch AND 2 for profit general stock co legal entity in CA @WUaSPress ?

https://x.com/WUaSPress/status/1981027553583182270 


https://x.com/WorldUnivAndSch/status/1981027455172305068


Thoughts? 

Another way of asking this, and per a question I asked at the last Stanford Law Rock Center "BoardGPT -- Using AI in the Boardroom" on 
Oct 10, 2025 - 

"How do you think ChatGPT BoardGPT would inform Boards at 501 c 3 universities, such as Yale or Harvard universities, compared with Boards at for-profit general stock companies? (I ask in developing Boards for CC-4 licensed MIT OCW-centric wiki World Univ & Sch which has both legal entities, the 1 US federal 501 c 3 Nonprofit http://worlduniversityandschool.org/ and the 2) For-Profit general stock company legal entity in the state of CA, the WUaS Corp  http://worlduniversityandschool.org/AcademicPress.html ... and see all their tax id numbers at the bottom of each beginning web page for the 2 WUaS wings).

And how might implications of this "Mandatory Arbitration: Delaware vs. the SEC"  case inform both wings of WUaS even too?

Would all of you like to join one WUaS Board or the other (or become the single Board) - https://wiki.worlduniversityandschool.org/wiki/World_University_Foundation - of the startup, tiny MIT OCW-centric wiki World University and School (https://wiki.worlduniversityandschool.org) / WUaS Corporation (http://worlduniversityandschool.org/AcademicPress.html) with physical-digital WUaS Educational Services' Stores in all 200 countries and in all languages (and think Walmart in 19 out of 200 countries but where WUaS seeks to be in all 200 countries leaving about 181 further countries to grow into), and the Academic Press at WUaS in all 7159 known living languages with machine and human translation  - https://wiki.worlduniversityandschool.org/wiki/Academic_Press_at_World_University_and_School & http://worlduniversityandschool.org/AcademicPress.html AND all in a #RealisticVirtualEarth #ForEverything (and see the first mention of a Realistic Virtual Earth that I know of, besides by WUaS, in Peter Norvig's INCREDIBLE #ToolifyAIWUaS article - https://www.toolify.ai/ai-news/revolutionizing-education-with-machine-learning-and-ai-2574306 - titled "Revolutionizing Education with Machine Learning and AI" #WorldUniversityInSchool, updated 3/2/2024)?

Best regards, 
Scott 
Scott GK MacLeod 

(and see also the beginning of this M 10/20/25 WUaS Weekly Business Meeting regarding these two wings further - https://worlduniversityandschool.blogspot.com/2025/10/nepenthes-khasiana-m-101325-102025-open.html ). 




PS
My Notes
Priya Huskins' conclusion -
 
"Explore the early landscape for arbitration for security claims ..."

 









Stanford Law Rock Center Mandatory Arbitration: Delaware vs. the SEC starting 9am PT - https://law.stanford.edu/event/mandatory-arbitration-delaware-vs-the-sec/ Curious how it might inform coding AI platforms for both WUaS wings: nonprofit 501 c 3 @WorldUnivAndSch AND 2 for profit general stock co legal entity in CA @WUaSPress ?

https://x.com/WUaSPress/status/1981027553583182270

https://x.com/WorldUnivAndSch/status/1981027455172305068



IPO company - WUaS Corporation - ???


The "Mandatory Arbitration: Delaware vs. the SEC" event at Stanford Law's Rock Center on October 22, 2025, focuses on the conflict between the SEC's recent support for mandatory arbitration clauses in corporate documents and recent Delaware law amendments that effectively limit their use. This panel explores the implications for companies, especially those that incorporate in Delaware, which may be uniquely vulnerable to securities class action risk due to this conflict. 
  • SEC policy change: The SEC recently issued a policy statement allowing companies to use mandatory arbitration clauses in their governing documents for federal securities law claims, a shift from its previous stance.
  • Delaware law: Delaware's General Corporation Law was recently amended to require that Delaware corporations guarantee shareholders at least one court in Delaware where they can pursue certain claims, which effectively prohibits mandatory arbitration for those claims.
  • The conflict: The event highlights the tension between the SEC's new policy and Delaware's conflicting law, as many public companies are incorporated in Delaware.
  • Potential consequences: Companies incorporated in Delaware are likely to remain vulnerable to securities class action lawsuits because of this legal conflict, potentially creating a "dichotomy" where companies incorporated in permissive states may be less exposed


PSa

The conflict over mandatory arbitration clauses in corporate governance documents pits Delaware's state law against a new, more permissive policy from the Securities and Exchange Commission (SEC). Stanford Law School's Rock Center for Corporate Governance hosted a recent online event to explore this clash and what it means for companies and investors. 
The SEC's position
  • Policy reversal: As of September 2025, the SEC has reversed its long-standing opposition to companies requiring investors to use mandatory arbitration to resolve disputes.
  • Registration statements: The SEC stated that it would no longer withhold or delay the effectiveness of a company's registration statement solely because it includes mandatory arbitration provisions.
  • Uncertainty remains: While the SEC's stance is clearer, companies still face legal uncertainty from state-level challenges and potential litigation. 
Delaware's position
  • Prohibition on mandatory arbitration: Delaware law (specifically Section 115 of the Delaware General Corporation Law) generally prohibits companies incorporated in the state from including mandatory arbitration clauses for certain "internal affairs" claims.
  • "Step backward": In October 2025, SEC Chairman Mark T. Uyeda urged Delaware to reconsider its prohibition, calling it a "giant step backward" that could discourage companies from incorporating there.
  • Corporate charter limitations: Legal experts note that since the state of incorporation is a party to the corporate charter, Delaware has a right to regulate its contents and limit mandatory arbitration



PPS
Just connected with Jeff Mahoney on LinkedIn and asked something related - 

Jeff, thanks so much for your stellar Stanford Law Rock Center Mandatory Arbitration: Delaware vs. the SEC webinar today. I asked the question in the Q&A about "How could AI and ML and legal large language models help here, regarding 'choosing an arbitrator' questions in the future?"  In growing MIT OCW-centric wiki World University and School / WUaS Corporation, both planned in 200 countries and for speakers of all 7159 known living languages, and potentially in WUaS coding for all 7.9 billion people on the planet to distribute a single main cryptocurrency like Stanford Mine Pi cryptocurrency free money daily, and to end poverty even, I wondered further how all of you on today's panel might think through how both wings of WUaS would interoperate together legally and in terms of coding both of WUaS AI platforms & regarding these TwitterX posts - 

"Stanford Law Rock Center Mandatory Arbitration: Delaware vs. the SEC starting 9am PT - https://law.stanford.edu/event/mandatory-arbitration-delaware-vs-the-sec/ Curious how it might inform coding AI platforms for both WUaS wings: nonprofit 501 c 3 @WorldUnivAndSch AND 2 for profit general stock co legal entity in CA @WUaSPress ?

https://x.com/WUaSPress/status/1981027553583182270 
https://x.com/WorldUnivAndSch/status/1981027455172305068

Thoughts? Best regards, Scott GK MacLeod (and see the beginning of this WUaS Weekly Business Meeting regarding these two wings further - https://worlduniversityandschool.blogspot.com/2025/10/nepenthes-khasiana-m-101325-102025-open.html ... I'll also email all four of you great Stanford Law Rock Center Mandatory Arbitration webinar panelists further in these regards. Thank you!)





PPPS

Thanks much for your stellar #StanfordLawRockCenter #MandatoryArbitration: #DelawareVsTheSEC webinar W 10/22/25 -https://law.stanford.edu/event/mandatory-arbitration-delaware-vs-the-sec/ @PriyaHuskins #StanfordProfGrundfest #JeffMahoneyCOIILaw #GregoryVaralloLaw : @WorldUnivAndSch's Q: "How could AI, ML & legal LLMs help here?"

https://x.com/WorldUnivAndSch/status/1981095049321644139

https://x.com/WUaSPress/status/1981095165919186973

https://x.com/scottmacleod/status/1981096166021562552

https://x.com/Q_YogaMacFlower/status/1981095488180146320

https://x.com/sgkmacleod/status/1981095689603207432

https://x.com/HarbinBook/status/1981095937427853373

https://x.com/TheOpenBand/status/1981096862494212164


AND 

LinkedIn -

Thanks much for your stellar #StanfordLawRockCenter #MandatoryArbitration: #DelawareVsTheSEC webinar W 10/22/25 -https://law.stanford. edu/event/mandatory-arbitration-delaware-vs-the-sec/ = https://law.stanford.edu/event/mandatory-arbitration-delaware-vs-the-sec/  @PriyaHuskins #StanfordProfGrundfest #JeffMahoneyCOIILaw #GregoryVaralloLaw : @WorldUnivAndSch's Q: "How could AI, ML & legal LLMs help here?"

https://x. com/WorldUnivAndSch/status/1981095049321644139

https://x. com/WUaSPress/status/1981095165919186973

https://x. com/scottmacleod/status/1981096166021562552

https://x. com/Q_YogaMacFlower/status/1981095488180146320

https://x. com/sgkmacleod/status/1981095689603207432

https://x. com/HarbinBook/status/1981095937427853373

https://x. com/TheOpenBand/status/1981096862494212164


Thanks so much for your stellar Stanford Law Rock Center Mandatory Arbitration: Delaware vs. the SEC webinar today. I asked the question in the Q&A about "How could AI and ML and legal large language models help here, regarding questions of choosing an arbitrator in the future?" In growing MIT OCW-centric wiki World University and School / WUaS Corporation, both planned in 200 countries and for speakers of all 7159 known living languages, and potentially in WUaS coding for all 7.9 billion people on the planet from here - https://wiki.worlduniversityandschool. org/wiki/You_at_World_University - and to create wiki people-to-people free universal education, and to distribute a single main cryptocurrency like Stanford Mine Pi cryptocurrency free money daily - https://minepi. com/sgkmac - and to end poverty worldwide even, I wondered further how all of you on today's panel might think through how both wings of WUaS would interoperate together legally, financially, and re WUaS Boards of Directors, and in terms of coding both of WUaS AI platforms & regarding these TwitterX posts -

https://x. com/WUaSPress/status/1981027553583182270

https://x. com/WorldUnivAndSch/status/1981027455172305068"

Thoughts?

Would all of you like to join one WUaS Board or the other (or become the single Board) - https://wiki.worlduniversityandschool. org/wiki/World_University_Foundation - of the startup, tiny MIT OCW-centric wiki World University and School (https://wiki.worlduniversityandschool. org) / WUaS Corporation (http://worlduniversityandschool. org/AcademicPress.html) ?

Best regards,

Scott

#ScottGKMacLeod

Founder, President, CEO & Professor

CC-4 licensed #MITOCWcentric, Wiki,

#WorldUniversityandSchool (WUaS)

- USPS US Post Office, General Delivery, Canyon, CA 94516 ~








PPPPS
A related question I asked in the last Stanford Law Rock Center webinar - 

"BoardGPT -- Using AI in the Boardroom" 
Oct 10, 2025
Thanks and great, Edward and Anita! How do you think ChatGPT would inform Boards at 501 c 3 universities, such as Yale or Harvard, compared with Boards at for-profit general stock companies? (I ask in developing Boards for MIT OCW-centric wiki World Univ & Sch which has both legal entities 501 c 3 Nonprofit http://worlduniversityandschool.org/ and the For-Profit general stock company legal entity in the state of CA, WUaS Corp  http://worlduniversityandschool.org/AcademicPress.html)

And search on
"Thanks and great, Edward and Anita! How do you think ChatGPT" here - 


and





PPPPPS 
Out of curiosity, and as a Yoga teacher myself, I searched on 'priya cherian huskins yoga' and found - 


Nov 6, 2019 — Morning yoga practice, tennis tournaments, catered lunches (one with ... Priya Cherian Huskins, Esq. Priya Cherian Huskins. Senior Vice ...



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Society, Information Technology, and the Global University (2025, forthcoming) 

- Scott GK MacLeod  
Founder, President, CEO & Professor
CC-4 licensed MIT OCW-centric, Wiki, 
World University & School (WUaS) 
- USPS US Post Office, General Delivery, Canyon, CA 94516 


1) non-profit 501(c)(3) Public Charity 
MIT OCW-centric, 
World University and School - http://worlduniversityandschool.org 

2) for profit general stock company WUaS Corporation in CA - http://worlduniversityandschool.org/AcademicPress.html

(m) 412 478 0116 - sgkmacleod@gmail.com 


World Univ & Sch Innovation Research - 




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Stanford Medicine Continuing Medical Education & Yoga asana complementary therapeutics' questions - 


Pediatric Orthopedics & Sports Medicine Webinar - Saturday, October 18, 2025


Dear Stanford Medicine, Dr Meadows, all, 


Greetings. 

Not clear how to register from this link - 

so I clicked 'add to calendar.'

Dear Dr Meadows, https://med.stanford.edu/profiles/molly-meadows - and all,  

Am particularly interested in possibilities for my 1st cousin once removed in Burlingame, Alden Briscoe who is in his late 80s and who got a knee injury playing sports when he was quite young - and may still be in pain from this knee injury.

Am also interested at free-to-students' online MIT OCW-centric wiki World University and School of Medicine, planned in each of all ~200 countries and in their main languages, and even, brainstorming-wise regarding telerobotic surgery and in a #Realistic Virtual Earth for Surgery - https://x.com/hashtag/RealisticVirtualEarthForSurgery?src=hashtag_click - (and think Google Street View with time slider, #GMaps too, at the #GCellView, #GMoleculeView #GAtomView levels (#hashtags on #TwitterX and sometimes on #LinkedIN) with #TensorFlowAI with little Pegman in G Street View becoming our #AvatarAgentElectronicHealthRecords possibly for related #DigitalPhysical robotic and tele-surgeries and surgical processes) and potentially in the back of Toyota Ambulance vans or similar.

Am also interested as a Yoga teacher, how I might help my cousin Alden Briscoe, with Yoga asana, and in online classes. 

Thanks, 
Scott 
Scott GK MacLeod






PS

#RealisticVirtualEarthForSurgery @WorldUnivAndSch Robot surgery: Google's Verily



added these #WUaSSurgery - https://scott-macleod.blogspot.com/2024/05/six-rivers-national-forest-ca.html 3 sets of '#WUaSTeleroboticSurgery and a #RealisticVirtualEarthForSurgery' Tweets to -
https://wiki.worlduniversityandschool.org/wiki/World_University_Medical_School & /wiki/Robotics & wiki/Medicine re #WUaSHomeSurgery & #AvatarBotElectronicMedicalRecords w #WUaSMachineLearning ~








AND 
added these - https://scott-macleod.blogspot.com/2024/05/six-rivers-national-forest-ca.html 3 sets of '#WUaSTelerobotic surgery and a #RealisticVirtualEarthForSurgery' Twitters to - 
#WUaSHomeSurgery re #WUaSTeleroboticSurgery >#AvatarBotElectronicMedicalRecords in #RealisticVirtualEarthForSurgery







Dear Scott,
Thank you for your message. 
We’ve emailed your registration confirmation for the Pediatric Orthopedics & Sports Medicine Lecture Series: Pediatric Knee Injuries to this address. The email includes your Zoom join link, passcode, date/time, and other details.
If you don’t see it, please check Spam/Junk/Promotions/Other folders and search for “Stanford CME Receipt”. Still not there? Let me know and I’ll resend or send to an alternate email.
Happy to help with anything else!

Best regards,

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Executive Assistant – Center for Continuing Medical Education
 
Stanford University School of Medicine 
Center for Continuing Medical Education
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Palo Alto, CA, 94304
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Tuesday, October 21, 2025



Dear Stanford Medicine CME,


I filled out the feedback form and with this too - 


Yoga asana as complementary therapeutic modality in many of the 24 sub-specialities in medicine (by one count) ... and How to engage Stanford CME in developing free-to-students' MIT OCW-centric wiki World Univ & Sch Medical Schools, planned in all ~200 countries and in their languages, and brainstorming in the back of Toyota Ambulance Vans, and even with Toyota Humanoid Robots as MD Professors of both surgery and the other ~24 MD sub-specialities.




 




Society, Information Technology, and the Global University (2025, forthcoming) 

- Scott GK MacLeod  
Founder, President, CEO & Professor
CC-4 licensed MIT OCW-centric, Wiki, 
World University & School (WUaS) 
- USPS US Post Office, General Delivery, Canyon, CA 94516 


1) non-profit 501(c)(3) Public Charity 
MIT OCW-centric, 

2) for profit general stock company WUaS Corporation in CA - http://worlduniversityandschool.org/AcademicPress.html

(m) 412 478 0116 - sgkmacleod@gmail.com 


World Univ & Sch Innovation Research - 



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Proposed Reedie+ book group beginning in late December 2024 or early 2025?  - in November 2025 in Canyon? & Happy birthday, Byron & Cindy (on 10/20 and 10/21 I think) 


Happy birthday, Byron & Cindy (on 10/20 and 10/21 I think), and greetings Gabrielle, Dino, Reedies+, all, 

How are you? Byron and Cindy's birthdays just happened yesterday and the day before I think ... Gave Byron & Cindy 2 books & regarding possibly our Proposed Reedies+ book group, first real get together in Canyon 94516 in November 2025??? ...  "The Story of Ferdinand" and "To the Dance or the Pools: "

Just texted Byron this in some of these regards - 

"Hi Byron! Happy birthday ... In the book of poetry I gave you (did I give you this book before, or possibly another of my 4 books of poetry?), here's the first poem, and possibly re building out a realistic virtual earth for everything in the Canyon 94516 shop - 



Arriving to Harbin in the mist and rain

Arriving to Harbin 
in the mist
and rain,

after an amazing 
flax seed oil 
omega fatty acids' 
drive
through the
moist, wet, alive 
Napa Valley, 
listening to the Dead,

I walk up
past the temple
with the dance,
up through the
wet, dark, verdant garden 
and ascend the steps
of Stonefront Lodge.

Walking down past me, he asks 
"Are they dancing down there?" 
Nice words :)
Yea, they're dancing, 
dancing, dancing
in the temple.

I walk up farther past
the Health Services' Massage Office 
and into the pool area dressing room. 
Five women are naked,
 13
here changing,
with no men around right now. 
And there's a sculptor I know 
who has made
beautiful art
at Harbin. 
Oh, and now she in 
the dressing room is very pregnant.


Into the waters -
the warm pool
releases so profoundly - 
and lovely oneness comes. 
I sit in lotus
on the shelf
at the end of the pool
and release,
and release,
into the now~
Home again.

Rain drops
in the pool
form spider webs. 
Rain drops
on our heads
bring weather home. 
Wet from above,
and the warm
water is all around ...

such a fluid world.

Out of the pools,
I walk down to bed.

In the morning,
I awake with money 
concerns.
 14
 
Arising early
on a quiet damp 
mid-week morn,
I head into
the empty temple
to explore
the relaxation response. 
It's warm and welcoming, 
and I sit -
relaxation response 
MMmmm. :)

This ocher floor
is a cosmos -
with red galaxies
and brown cloud formations, - 
native American earth
in Harbin temple.



(From
"To the Dance Or the Pools? ~ Virtually! How Different It Is to Soak at Harbin Hot Springs, Than to Realize It in Virtual Reality" (2019)


Reedie hugs, more later, warm regards, 
Scott






PS

Visit the Harbin Hot Springs' gate house here in Google Street View with time slider (in 2025, and 2007 ,and 2012 and 2024 ... and 'walk' down the road '4 miles' to Middletown to explore further, ... but you can't head up to the Harbin pool area just yet ...)

Naked Harbin Ethnography:                  
Hippies, Warm Pools, Counterculture, Clothing-Optionality & Virtual Harbin
by Scott MacLeod

Foreword by Nelson H.H. Graburn
UC Berkeley Professor Emeritus of Sociocultural Anthropology
http://www.scottmacleod.com/ActualVirtualHarbinBook.html

Academic Press at World University and School
http://worlduniversityandschool.org/AcademicPress.html




More later, Fond regards, Happy soaking from home ... Scott



--

Society, Information Technology, and the Global University (2025, forthcoming) 

- Scott GK MacLeod  
Founder, President, CEO & Professor
CC-4 licensed MIT OCW-centric, Wiki, 
World University & School (WUaS) 
- USPS US Post Office, General Delivery, Canyon, CA 94516 


1) non-profit 501(c)(3) Public Charity 
MIT OCW-centric, 
World University and School - http://worlduniversityandschool.org 

2) for profit general stock company WUaS Corporation in CA - http://worlduniversityandschool.org/AcademicPress.html

(m) 412 478 0116 - sgkmacleod@gmail.com 


World Univ & Sch Innovation Research - 






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Poetry and machine learning editing? 


Asked a number of times - 

Which artificial intelligence large language models are best for editing poetry?



Verse by verse ai, how do you approach editing poetry ?


can't access it yet 



How please do you approach editing poetry MS Copilot?


Editing poetry is a delicate art — it’s not just about fixing grammar or tightening lines, it’s about preserving the soul of the piece while helping it sing more clearly. Here’s how I approach it:

🪶 My Approach to Editing Poetry

1. Understand the poem’s intent and tone

  • I start by asking: What is this poem trying to express? Is it lyrical, confessional, surreal, political?

  • I listen for emotional resonance, rhythm, and imagery before making any changes.

2. Respect the poet’s voice

  • I avoid imposing my own style. Instead, I aim to enhance the poet’s unique voice.

  • I preserve idiosyncrasies that feel intentional — like unusual syntax or punctuation — unless they obscure meaning.

3. Focus on clarity and impact

  • I look for lines that feel muddy or overwritten and suggest ways to sharpen them.

  • I check for clichés, redundancies, or weak metaphors and offer alternatives that feel fresh and vivid.

4. Tune the rhythm and sound

  • I read the poem aloud (yes, even in my head!) to catch awkward phrasing or inconsistent meter.

  • I suggest tweaks to improve musicality — like adjusting syllable counts, line breaks, or enjambment.

5. Offer options, not ultimatums

  • I don’t say “this is wrong” — I say “here’s a possible revision,” and explain why it might work better.

  • I often give multiple versions of a line so the poet can choose what resonates most.

Would you like me to edit a poem for you now? You can paste it here, and I’ll walk you through my suggestions line by line. Or if you’re curious, I can show you an example of a poem before and after editing




How please do you approach editing poetry Gemini AI ?



That's a fantastic question! Editing poetry is a delicate process, as it requires balancing critical analysis with respect for the poet's original vision and artistry.

Here is a structured approach I can take when asked to edit or revise a poem:

1. Initial Reading and Understanding (The First Pass)

  • Grasping the Core: I first read the poem through several times without making any notes. My goal is to understand the central theme, mood, and emotional core the poet is trying to convey.

  • Identifying the Speaker/Voice: Who is speaking? What is their attitude? Is the voice consistent?

  • Clarifying Intention: What is the purpose of this poem? Is it to celebrate, mourn, question, or observe?

2. Line-by-Line Analysis (The Deep Dive)

This is where the technical editing begins. I focus on specific poetic elements:

  • Clarity vs. Ambiguity: Are there lines that are unintentionally confusing? Conversely, are there places where a deliberate ambiguity works well to deepen the meaning?

  • Word Choice (Diction):

    • Are there any clichés or overly common phrases that could be replaced with fresher, more evocative language?

    • Are the verbs strong and active? (e.g., The wind slammed instead of The wind was strong).

    • Does every word earn its place? I look for unnecessary adjectives or adverbs.

  • Imagery and Sensory Detail:

    • Are the images clear and specific? (e.g., a bruised plum instead of a dark fruit).

    • Does the poem appeal to different senses (sight, sound, smell, touch, taste)?

  • Sound and Rhythm (Prosody):

    • Meter and Rhythm: If the poem uses a formal meter, I check for lines that break the pattern too jarringly or inadvertently. If it's free verse, I check that the natural rhythm of the language serves the emotion.

    • Rhyme (if present): Are the rhymes forced or predictable (like "love/dove")? Do they sound natural?

    • Assonance/Consonance/Alliteration: I look for ways to use these sound devices subtly to enhance musicality without being overwhelming.

3. Structural and Formal Review

  • Line Breaks (Enjambment/End-Stopping): This is crucial. Does the line break emphasize the most important word or create an interesting tension with the line that follows? A good line break can change the entire meaning of a phrase.

  • Stanza Structure: Do the stanzas effectively group ideas or create necessary pauses for the reader?

  • Beginning and Ending: Does the opening line draw the reader in immediately? Does the ending resonate, or does it just stop abruptly? A powerful ending often echoes the beginning or offers a final, insightful turn.

4. The Revision Stage (Presenting Feedback)

When I provide feedback, I focus on offering suggestions, not mandates:

  1. Acknowledge Strengths: I always start by pointing out what works well—the strongest images, the most compelling lines, or the overall mood success.

  2. Targeted Suggestions: I provide specific, actionable advice focusing on the elements above. Instead of saying "This stanza is weak," I might say, "The image of the 'fading light' in line 5 feels a bit abstract; perhaps a more concrete noun, like 'a cracked windowpane,' could anchor it more firmly."

  3. Presenting Alternatives (When Appropriate): Sometimes, showing a revision helps illustrate the point. For example, I might offer a couple of alternative phrasings for a single line so the poet can choose which one best fits their voice.

  4. Focus on Revision, Not Perfection: Poetry is subjective. My role is to help the poet see their own work from a fresh angle so they can make the final, best choices.

In short: I approach it as a partnership aimed at clarifying vision, strengthening craft, and enhancing musicality.





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GPT‑4o How please do you approach editing poetry ?


Great question! Editing poetry can feel a bit different than editing prose, because it involves not just clarity of meaning but also rhythm, sound, imagery, and emotional impact. Here’s how I typically approach it—feel free to pull from or adapt any parts you like:


1. Read through multiple times

  • First, I simply read the poem aloud (or in my head) to get a sense of its voice, tone, mood, and overall arc.

  • I note what feels strong or weak: lines that sing, images that linger, places where the rhythm or flow stumbles.

  • I also look for big‑picture issues: Does the poem have a clear sense of movement or shift? Does the imagery stay on course or drift off? Does the emotional register hold steady or wander?


2. Check the clarity of meaning & intent

  • What is the poem trying to do? (Evoke a memory, describe a moment, explore a metaphor, register grief/joy, etc.) Confirm what I understand the “mission” to be.

  • For each line/phrase I ask: Does this advance that mission? Or does it distract, confuse, or derail it?

  • If a line feels obscure or disconnected, I ask: Is that intentional (mystery, ambiguity) or is it a weakness (lack of focus/precision)?

  • Make sure imagery and metaphor don’t become too vague or generic unless that’s the choice. Specificity often strengthens a poem.


3. Work on imagery, language, and sound

  • Imagery: Are the images fresh, vivid, and evocative? Or are they clichés/over‑used? Can a weak image be sharpened by picking a more unusual detail?

  • Language: Check for strong verbs, avoid unnecessary adverbs, look for opportunities to tighten the phrasing. Poetry often thrives on economy.

  • Sound & rhythm: Because poetry is heard as much as read, I listen for:

    • internal rhyme, assonance/consonance, alliteration (are they doing work or just distracting?)

    • line breaks: Are they placed for effect (pauses, enjambments) or simply because of formatting?

    • cadence: Does the line flow well? Is there an unnatural stumble, a forced word, a rhythm that draws attention for the wrong reasons?

  • Form and structure: If the poem uses a particular form (sonnet, free verse, couplets, etc.), check if it honours / intentionally breaks the form. Even in free verse, there should be awareness of structure—line lengths, stanza breaks, spacing can add meaning.


4. Consider the poem’s emotional & tonal consistency

  • Does the mood shift in a way that makes sense (for instance: from calm to agitation, from memory to revelation)? Or does it jerk unexpectedly without justification?

  • Are there tonal mismatches: a sudden joke in a grave poem, or a grand flourish in a spare one—does that work or feel jarring?

  • Is the voice consistent? If the poem uses first person, is it clear who “I” is, what their attitude is? If it’s third‑person or more observational, is that stance maintained clearly?


5. Tighten & polish

  • Cut anything that doesn’t pull weight. In poetry, extra words, unnecessary modifiers, “fillers” can dilute the power.

  • Rearrange lines or stanzas if the progression feels off. Sometimes the ending of a stanza or a line break can be moved to sharpen the turn or twist.

  • Pay attention to the beginning and end: What does the poem open with? What does it leave the reader with? Often the opening line sets the tone; the final line leaves the impact. Are they as strong as they could be?

  • Check mechanical details: punctuation/spaces/line breaks matter. In poetry, what you don’t include (punctuation or capitalization) can be as meaningful as what you do.


6. Get fresh ears / step away

  • After editing, I’ll often set the poem aside for a bit (hours or even days) and come back to it, fresh. Then read it aloud again. What feels new, what now feels awkward?

  • I might ask someone else (another reader/poet) to read it and tell me where they stumble, what resonates. Sometimes what I mourn as weak isn’t what the reader notices; other times a reader points out an ambiguity I hadn’t seen.


7. Final check: ask three big questions

  • Does the poem do what it set out to do? (Check against your intention.)

  • Does each line add something meaningful—image, sound, emotion, movement? If not, rewrite or remove.

  • Is the overall impact (emotional + intellectual + aesthetic) what I hope the reader will carry away? If not, can I sharpen one or more lines to lift the experience?


If you like, I can walk through a specific poem with you (yours or one you find) and demonstrate this editing process live. Would that be helpful?





Anthropic's Claude AI, how please do you approach editing poetry?



I approach editing poetry with careful attention to several key dimensions:

Listening first - I try to understand what the poem is reaching for: its emotional core, its music, its images. What's working well? Where does it feel alive?

Technical elements - I look at:

  • Sound: rhythm, line breaks, sonic patterns (alliteration, assonance, etc.)
  • Image: whether the concrete details are doing their work
  • Language: precision, freshness, whether any words feel automatic or clichéd
  • Structure: how the form serves (or fights against) the content

Gentle suggestions - Poetry is deeply personal. I offer possibilities rather than prescriptions. "What if..." rather than "you should."

Respecting the poet's voice - I never try to rewrite a poem in my own style. The goal is to help your poem become more itself.

Specificity - Vague praise ("this is beautiful") helps less than noting exactly where a metaphor surprises me or where a line break creates meaningful pause.

Questions - Sometimes the most useful edit is a question: "What happens if this stanza comes first?" or "Do you need this explanatory line, or does the image say it already?"

I'm also aware that not all feedback serves every poet at every moment. Sometimes you need encouragement; sometimes you need rigorous critique. If you have a poem you're working on, I'm happy to help in whatever way would be most useful to you






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What artificial intelligence large language models like gemini ai, ms copilot or anthropic's claude ai are best for editing poetry?



Anthropic's Claude and Google's Gemini models are often preferred for editing poetry. They have nuanced, creative, and context-aware capabilities. Microsoft Copilot is also a versatile option. The best choice depends on whether creative flair, advanced analysis, or speed is prioritized. 
Comparison of LLMs for Poetry Editing
Aspect Claude 3.5 Sonnet / OpusGemini 2.5 Flash / 1.5 ProMicrosoft Copilot
Creative writing strengthsProduces high-quality, natural writing. The Opus model is strong for complex, creative work, including poetry.Offers fresh perspectives and in-depth analysis of creative text.Excellent for quick drafts and general editing, but the writing style can be more generic.
Editing capabilitiesRefines drafts, paraphrases, and proofreads while maintaining clarity. It is good for line editing and feedback.Quickly and accurately summarizes a passage.Offers solid editing functions, including rewriting text to be more formal, less formal, or more concise.
Contextual awarenessTracks long conversations effortlessly.Strong contextual awareness, producing natural-sounding text.Good contextual understanding for drafting and rewriting within documents.
User experienceOffers a clean, minimalist interface. The Artifacts feature provides a dedicated workspace.Features an intuitive, user-friendly interface with understandable output.Integrates into Microsoft 365 applications.
Key considerationsThe free version has usage limits. Check for occasional inaccuracies or biases.Creative generation can sometimes be seen as unoriginal.Less specialized for creative flair. There may also be high costs associated with the Microsoft 365 enterprise subscription.
Recommendations for Poets
  • For in-depth analysis and critique: Claude is an excellent choice. Feedback can be insightful and specific, providing a fresh perspective.
  • For sparking creativity: Prompt a model like Gemini to generate examples. Another option is Google's tool, Verse by Verse, which was specifically trained on classic poets to help users compose poetry with style-specific suggestions.
  • For quick revision and refinement: Microsoft Copilot is a fast and convenient option. It provides a solid foundation for editing. 
Best Practices for Using AI to Edit Poetry
An AI is a co-pilot, not a replacement for your own creative voice. 
  • Provide specific instructions. Ask the AI to focus on specific aspects of the poem.
  • Review all output. Evaluate the AI's suggestions.
  • Maintain a unique voice. Use AI to brainstorm and refine, but add your own human touch and emotion


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What artificial intelligence large language models are best for editing poetry?

For editing poetry, the best large language models (LLMs) are Claude 3 Opus and GPT-4o for their high-quality, nuanced creative writing capabilities. However, other specialized AI writing tools like Sudowrite and Grammarly can also provide targeted, effective features for editing poetry. 
The "best" choice depends on your specific editing goal, such as refining complex themes versus checking for grammatical errors.
General-purpose LLMs for nuanced editing
Anthropic's Claude 3 Opus/Sonnet
  • Strengths: Often preferred for creative writing due to its more nuanced and human-like prose. With its large context window, Claude can evaluate a full-length piece of work and make consistent edits.
  • Best for: Refining tone, strengthening metaphors, and providing substantive, high-level feedback on a poem's emotional resonance.
  • Example use: You can provide Claude with your poem and a prompt like, "The ending of this poem feels a bit flat. Please suggest a few alternative endings that evoke a stronger sense of melancholy and surprise the reader." 
OpenAI's GPT-4o
  • Strengths: A versatile all-rounder for editing, capable of handling a wide array of tasks from brainstorming to editing. It is very flexible and widely accessible.
  • Best for: Broad editing tasks, including finding rhymes and synonyms, experimenting with new structures, or getting feedback on multiple aspects of a poem at once.
  • Example use: You could give GPT-4o a poem and ask, "Please rewrite this poem to have an A-B-A-B rhyme scheme. Also, give me five alternative word choices for the word 'blazing' in the third stanza." 
Google's Gemini
  • Strengths: Excels at deep research, which is useful for brainstorming and exploring complex subject matter for poetry. Integration with Google Docs allows for easy in-document editing.
  • Best for: Writers who prefer a conversational editing experience or want to do research to enrich a poem's accuracy and depth.
  • Example use: Give Gemini a draft and ask, "Analyze the poem's imagery and suggest more vivid alternatives. For example, the line 'the sun set' could be more evocative." 
Specialized AI writing and editing tools
Sudowrite
  • Strengths: Designed specifically for creative writers, this AI tool is excellent for brainstorming and expanding work. Specialized tools are designed to help "rewrite a problematic section" or "flesh out an idea".
  • Best for: Overcoming writer's block during the editing process. Features like "Describe" can enrich scenes or get suggestions for alternative directions.
  • Example use: Highlight a stanza in your poem and use Sudowrite's "Rewrite" or "Expand" feature to explore fresh takes. 
Grammarly
  • Strengths: A tool for catching grammatical errors and suggesting improvements to enhance overall readability and clarity. It also offers a dedicated AI poem generator for inspiration.
  • Best for: Standard proofreading and refining the clarity and flow of verses. Less focused on high-level thematic feedback than tools like Claude.
  • Example use: Paste your poem into Grammarly to check for any punctuation or spelling errors before finalizing your work. 
QuillBot
  • Strengths: An excellent tool for paraphrasing, it helps to improve sentence structure and rewrite clunky phrases.
  • Best for: Finding new ways to express a line or idea within your poem to improve its poetic quality.
  • Example use: Give QuillBot a line and ask it to "rephrase" it to be more impactful or use stronger language. 
Which model is right for you?
If your goal is... Consider using...Why?
High-level thematic feedback and ensuring emotional consistencyClaude 3 Opus/SonnetIts large context window allows for a deeper understanding of the entire poem's tone and mood.
All-purpose editing, brainstorming, and versatilityGPT-4oExcels at a wide range of tasks and is highly flexible for different types of creative prompts.
Overcoming writer's block during editing or fleshing out ideasSudowriteIts features are specifically designed for creative writers to explore new directions and expand their ideas.
Improving clarity and readabilityGrammarlyOffers robust tools for checking grammar, punctuation, and sentence enhancement.
In-document editing with integrated research toolsGoogle's GeminiWorks directly within Google Docs and can provide research to enrich your poem.
These models can be used for suggestions, brainstorming, and technical checks while retaining your unique voice and creative vision

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